Ray's Ordeal

A guy named Ray is kidnapped and assaulted by an unknown group of men, in verse.

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The hour was late before Ray headed home

From his brother's party, as held at Le Dome.

The blues and blacks of the night's sharp monochrome

Made him feel so easy, he thought he would roam

Since he had a condo that wasn't too far.

But he didn't notice when that big blue car

Pulled out of the parking lot next to the bar

And quietly followed him. Back doors ajar.

He reached his street and as he started to turn

The car pulled ahead of him. Too late to learn

Four men were inside of it, and each did burn

To force Ray to join in their weekend sojourn.

So out they jumped and around him they did swarm

To bind him and gag him. Then to his alarm,

Into their trunk, he went. Oh, they meant him harm,

And he knew he'd never escape them, through charm.

For three weeks Ray vanished and could not be found.

The fear grew that he was six feet underground.

Then one day he showed up, and he looked half-drowned.

"I'll tell you what happened," he said. "Gather 'round."

His body was bruised and the scars on his back

Proved without a doubt he'd been under attack.

"Four men took turns beating me, in a room black,

And raping me, each one a wild maniac.

I spoke to one softly, and I made him care.

Then I learned a secret that they did not share.

The room was a cellar, and all its fresh air

Came through a vent in the ceiling. So there

I focused my efforts to set myself free.

The black paint had hidden it well. I could see,

That it was too narrow for someone like me

But it proved an excellent decoy. That's key.

So when one of them came in to have his sick joy,

I hid in the shadows, and I did employ

The sight of the open vent. I wasn't coy.

He ran off to tell them that they'd lost their boy.

He left the door open. I raced down the hall

To stairs leading up and outside. Their footfall

Was fast coming after me, and they did call

For me to stop running. What I did was haul

As fast as I could to a thick grove of trees

And hid in there. Grateful for a gentle breeze.

Then made my way here, keeping hidden. For these

Madmen now wanted to kill me. So please,

Let me have a good meal and bath, and then I

Will lead the police back to where they do lie."

And that's what Ray did. He was some kind of guy.

But never did we learn those men's reasons why.

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